miércoles, 7 de octubre de 2015

Correction written assignment

Rationale

In this creative writing, I will write about the novel: "The kite Runner". The author of the book is Khaled Hosseini, a very good novelist, the story is about a pashtung boy who has a Hazara servant but they are very good friends. One day the life of these two boys changes forever.

This creative writing, will connect to the novel because, I will use the same characters of the novel and the same context this book is written. I will write a diary entry about Amir feelings and opinion in a special moment of the book.

My objective with this is comment to all kids and teens, that the opinion of other people about your friends it can affect your relationship, my recommendation is to believe always in them, if he always defends and help you, don't let it go.

I´m going to do a diary entry, because it is the best way to give a personal experience and feelings in the moment it is happening. I will use a semi-formal language because in this text you write to yourself, so will be more confident. I want to do it simple as possible, with nothing special in it, only I want to say to the boys to believe always in your friends.
 


Creative writing



Winter 1975
Diary:

Well, tomorrow is the day, the kite running competition, it is the day when Baba will finally put his eyes on me and I need to do it well. In the last 3 years all the attention went to Hassan. A few weeks later I've heard Baba with Rahim Khan when they were having a conversation, my own father thinks I am a coward, he thinks I can´t do anything by myself, but tomorrow everything will be different.


Days ago, it was Hassan birthday, he was very happy all day, in the morning I gave him a new slingshot and he was very grateful with me, I decided to give him this present because one day, after watching a movie of John Wayne, we were walking and the stupid of Aseef with his friends, went to bother us, I was really nervous in that moment, he started to say that me and Hassan were not friends because he is a hazara and I am a pashtung, and quickly Hassan took his old slingshot trying to protect me, and that resulted because Aseef and his friends, left the place. Well, to continue, on Hassan's birthday, I was reading to him a story in the pomegranate tree and Baba came in his car to take us to find a present for Hassan. I wanted to sit in front on the car, but, Baba preferred Hassan to sit on front because it was his birthday. On the way to the store Hassan was very happy, he took out his face through the window and the wind hit his face. In the store Hassan had the opportunity to choose any kite. In that moment I started to feel jealous of Hassan, also because in another birthday Baba gave him an operation of his lips, Baba always is better with him, he always is happy with him, so what kind of friend wants to take my father off me?

The words of Aseef probably are true, Hassan is only a hazara that is good with me, only to have good things. Probably he wants to destroy my life, and he covered trying to help and protect me, he is only playing with me. A demonstration of this could be that day when I received Rahim Khan´s letter with his opinion of my little story, Rahim says it was a good story and I told Hassan, Rahim Khan´s opinion. After this, Hassan wanted to hear my story, after telling him, he searched for something bad to criticize my job. Hassan did very well, he destroyed my job, he always wants to make my life worse. I think Hassan wants to steal my Baba.

But he is the only boy  who I play with, because I grew with him, I have lived with Hassan all my life, more than 10 years, we had a lot of good moments together, we are like brothers. So, how can I know if he really is a true friend or not? A true friend always wants to make you happy, a true friend is always loyal, he protected me of Aseef, but a friend doesn't try to steal your father.

I'm really confused right now, I hope tomorrow, I will know the answer.